The bar chart below shows the number of miles travelled in a year by men and women for six different purposes in a particular country. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The data regarding the numbers of miles covered by male and female on the annual basis for various purposes in a specific nation is picturized by the given chart.
On having an overall, it is apparent that, both men and women covered maximum miles for the work purpose. However, the numbers of miles in case of day trip is minimum travelled by the both genders.
Upon analysing the presentation, it is vivid that, male covered more miles for the work purpose accounted for 35000 and female travelled least as compared to male by 10000 miles but which tends to be higher as compared to other activities. This is followed by, the shopping in which women travelled more than men by 3000 miles. This is carried by, one another activity in which again male travelled least number of miles then female which is 25000 in case of male and 27000 with regards of female.
Probing further, meeting friends is more popular in women so they travelled 25000 miles for this activity whereas, men unlike this activity and covered 22000 miles which is least than women. Moreover, the rest of two activities is liked by male so they travelled 15000 miles for entertainment but the female travelled 11000 miles. For the day trip men prefered to travelled more than women with 10000 and 6000 miles respectively.
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| 2021-08-23 | sonia 7022 | 79 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Upon analysing the presentation, it is vivid that, male covered more miles for ...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...0000 miles but which tends to be higher as compared to other activities. This is f...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... shopping in which women travelled more then men by 3000 miles. This is carried by, ...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the least'.
Suggestion: is the least
... activity and covered 22000 miles which is least then women. Moreover, the rest of two a...
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Line 7, column 380, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...day trip men prefered to travelled more then women with 10000 and 6000 miles respect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80803571429 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3955833018 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4143478939 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214225114673 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112836929704 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025720016491 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14882639809 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172972974441 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.