the bar chart below shows the number of people visiting two different cites by seasons
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates information about how many people visited Dover city and Troy city in different seasons in the year.
Overall, there was considerable growth in the number of tourists visiting in Dover city from spring to winter, while the number of people visiting in the Troy city varies significantly over the year by different seasons.
More people preferred to spend their time in the summer in Troy city than in Dover city. In contrast, Dover city was a popular destination for tourists in winter. The least number of tourists visitors was in the spring for both cites whit 5000 in Dover and around 4900 in Tory city.
Dover city followed a gradual increase and doubled in the summer, while the number of tourists visitor in Troy city rose significantly to about 22000. In the autumn the number of tourists visitors in the Dover city continues to grow moderately by 5000; whereas the number of people visited Troy city decline slightly to 20000, Dover city saw a sustainable boom to 25000 people visitors in winter however it can be seen the number of tourists visitors dropped sharply to 5000
- The bar chart below show the number of tourists visiting two different cities by season 67
- The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
- Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ted Troy city decline slightly to 20000, Dover city saw a sustainable boom to 250...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94210526316 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48003663631 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.071145374 43.030603864 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118209033061 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679774714654 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484668359148 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977431120895 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359912532666 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.