The given graph illustrates the proportion of male and female Australian practiced exercise regularly in 2010 in six different age groups.
It is interesting to note that the female always achieved the larger number of portion of people doing exercise than the male except the 15 to 24 age group.
The percentage of youngest age group reached the highest number of people doing exercise, meanwhile, this is contrary to female when its proportion for that age group was one of the lowest number of women joined some physical activities at only at only 47.7%.
The proportion of 3 continual age group from 35 to 64 that joined physical activity achieved the same number at 53%, by contrast, the 35 to 44 age group for male only got 39.5%, this number also was the lowest in all age group had people practiced exercise. Interestingly, the oldest age group ( 65 and over) had the same number of proportion of people joined sport at around 47%.
- All over the world people watch foreign film much than locally produced films Why Should the government provide financial support to local film industries 92
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.Discuss both these views and give your own o 84
- IELTS Task 1 - Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 67
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the youngest'.
Suggestion: of the youngest
...the 15 to 24 age group. The percentage of youngest age group reached the highest number of...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'at only'.
Suggestion: at only
...f women joined some physical activities at only at only 47.7%. The proportion of 3 continual a...
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Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ise. Interestingly, the oldest age group 65 and over had the same number of propo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8036809816 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56465199852 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8832196863 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.6 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219626490831 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129701942057 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549587506188 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142482125003 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492374523205 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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