The bar chart illustrates the rate of male and female in a variety age group between 15 and over who did exercises in 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of women did regular physical activity was more than men. People at the age between 15 and 24 did the physical activity more than others. While people who were in the age category from 25 to 34 took exercises the least. Furthermore, the most significant difference in percentage between men and women was in 35 to 44 age group.
In terms of percentage, 52.8 percent of man in Australia between 15 to 24 did training while women were 47.7 percent. On the other hand, in other age group female did exercise more than male. There was 52.5 percentage of women who did workout and it was 12 percentage more than men. At the age group between 65 and over, there were slight deference men 46.7 percent and women 47.1.
- many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 56
- Some of the world s languages are now spoken very little so steps should be taken to prevent their complete decline To what extent do you agree or disagree 91
- Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- The following appeared in a memorandum issued by the human-resources department of Capital Bank:"Capital Bank has always required that its employees wear suits at all times while at work. Last month, Capital’s employee absenteeism and attrition rates bo 60
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the physical activity more than others. While people who were in the age category fro...
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Line 2, column 238, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'took' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
... were in the age category from 25 to 34 took exercises the least. Furthermore, the ...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'train'
Suggestion: train
...f man in Australia between 15 to 24 did training while women were 47.7 percent. On the o...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49068322981 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40586837039 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.317074296 43.030603864 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401796211249 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179080043008 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814884885521 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289108882772 0.15604864568 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545791990993 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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