Many people support the suggestion of existing in foreign state brings about profound issues to society and also practical difficulties. Personally, I have two different opinions on this point of view and I explain it in my essay.
From one hand, relocation to abroad it’s a huge opportunity to comprehend new mode of life, culture and see world contrariwise. For instance, people who enter university in a foreign country deal with new conception of educating, communicating and also social habits, which on the one hand can be considered as practical difficulties, but I think that all these life situations just expand experience and knowledge which will be highly important in life. Furthermore, at the same time people are becoming more adaptive to environment in which they live and easily coping with life complication.
From another hand, society problems which can be cause by nonresidents. The two most significant barriers to people who live in nonnative countries are communication and adaptation in unknown environment. And it is said that without opportunity to assimilate and inability to speak in local language nonresidents face to problems with finding a high payment job, receiving a qualitative healthcare and with other public hardness. These painful lessons we can see in many countries of Europe like UK, France, Germany etc., where are being populated by foreigners from Africa and West Asia and there are formed areas where they live. However, most of these new inhabitants don’t follow the laws, don’t respect current orders and it can cause social trouble as criminal, discrimination and violence.
In conclusion, process of moving to live in a different place is complicated and firstly depends on human beings themselves, if all people would try to understand others there will be no troubles in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 47, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32764505119 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04099968175 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627986348123 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5692482257 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.909090909 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220341397442 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738814104528 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467285526986 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109973826945 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836855981664 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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