It is said that news at present-days broadcast only negative aspects of life and it has negative impact on humankind generally. However, the issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.
On the one hand, it can not be denied that it has become a large amount of resources which distribute a different sorts of information through the world nowadays and most of them don’t bring benefits to society. The major disadvantage of modern news is coverage only issue problems without offering solutions and people turn out to be under pressure that can be cause illness of people and problem in society. For instance, it is considered that negative flow of information trigger depression in person and other different mental illnesses. Another argument is fear which also can be formed in man affordable media and can be cause not only health issue but also problem in family, at work, with friends.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that despite of all material that people receive from various resources, there are news which bear valuable and necessary information to society and do not adversely affect it. Examples can be seen in difference spheres such as information technology, medicine or education in which journalist try to announcement and focus on new developments created to help human to evolve and move forward.
Overall, people should choose only that information which essential to their and sift out unnecessary in order to fence their self of negative facts. Also media have to present information in easier way and not to concentrate our attention only on gloomy aspects of life.
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? 74
- Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. 76
- Some people think men and women have different natural abilities that make them suitable for different types of work. Others, however, believe that both men and women can be equally suited to do any type of work. Discuss both views and give your own opini 67
- Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business. To what extent do you agree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... formed in man affordable media and can be cause not only health issue but also problem ...
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...nouncement and focus on new developments created to help human to evolve and mov...
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...opments created to help human to evolve and move forward. Overall, people sho...
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... to fence their self of negative facts. Also media have to present information in ea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09893992933 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81016273039 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590106007067 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4454537263 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.181818182 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790578098188 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283849600916 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305516316884 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435350514685 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291732501109 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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