The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart describes percentile of Australian men and women who enrolled in daily exercises in the year 2010, groups are divided with ages.
In overall, Maximum percentage of women are involved in physical activity than men, except late teens. In comparison to older chunks they are imposing the similar range.
Firstly, In 15 to 24 cluster 52.8% of mens who are engaged in physical exercises that is the highest among all age groups. Although, In rest of the categories mens ratios seems dominated up to the group 55-64, they imposes 42.2%, 39.5%, 43.1% and, 45.1% respectively and age group from 35-44 are most inactive among all. The last age group have nearly same ratio of 47%.
Lastly, women seems to be highest physically active group in all chunks of ages, but early teens are 5.1% lesser than men populations. While up-to age group 45-54 age group increases, This age group are most active group and more than half percentage of people are involved in physical activity. women with more than 55 age are reducing their activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s are divided with ages. In overall, Maximum percentage of women are involved...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'impose'
Suggestion: impose
...s dominated up to the group 55-64, they imposes 42.2%, 39.5%, 43.1% and, 45.1% respecti...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Women
...ople are involved in physical activity. women with more than 55 age are reducing thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92655367232 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34998368374 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4529006255 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8888888889 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382325166446 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153657592298 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901640948089 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231538107192 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645373332267 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.