The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart illustrates information about the number of Australian men and women in different age groups who did physical activity on a regular basis in 2010
Overall, among male groups, the most enthusiastic age group is 15 to 24.
Rest of this group is below 50 percent. All female groups did physical activity a lot relatively since all percentages are higher than male one.
15 to 24 aged male group did physical activity at 52.8%, which is the highest percent among the male groups. From next age group(25 to 34) did it only as 42.2%.
The male figures seem to be getting marginally higher along with ages groups.
With regards to female, most female groups’ people did physical activity more than male groups. 35 to 44 aged group has a 52.5 percent of figure and a slight difference with two groups(45 to 54 , 55 to 64).
The biggest gap between male and female age groups is precisely 13% on 35 to 44 aged group as opposed to smallest one is on 65 and over, which has 0.4% gap
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 20, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'group' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'groups'.
Suggestion: groups
...er than male one. 15 to 24 aged male group did physical activity at 52.8%, which i...
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Line 8, column 197, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...light difference with two groups45 to 54 , 55 to 64. The biggest gap between ma...
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Line 10, column 103, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the smallest'.
Suggestion: to the smallest
...y 13% on 35 to 44 aged group as opposed to smallest one is on 65 and over, which has 0.4% g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57541899441 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45237979658 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.3975530948 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405356096136 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164155126832 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13515657402 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206068260756 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.18665295512 0.0819641961636 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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