The supplied diagram shows the proportion of Australian men and women who undertook exercise, ranging from adolescents to the elderly, in 2010.
A glance at the graph reveals that the most enthusiastic age group of men is 15 to 24; while there was a drop as their ages increased in general, with 10% decrease every ten ages between 15 and 24 on average.
By comparison with men doing physical activity, the graph shows the number of women who engaged in exercise is larger from various ages, apart from the age from 15 to 24. The percentage of this activism was roughly over half.
As we can see, the largest gap between men and women who took exercise was from the age 35 to 44, which corresponds 39.5 percent of men and 52.5 percent of women.
However, the male figures seem to be getting marginally higher along with age groups. It could be seen that the 65 and over age group, between male and female who did the regular activity, had nearly same proportion with 46.7% and 47.1%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y same proportion with 46.7% and 47.1%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, thus, while, apart from, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6384180791 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37930258432 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6268591271 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316571384409 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136548524036 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564335100552 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166345006852 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442222758389 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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