The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of males and females in Australia that are involved in frequent physical activity in 2010 across different age groups.
Overall, the percentage of men involved in regular exercise is lower across majority of the age groups when compared to the proportion of women who did physical activity often.
In the various age groups for men, physical activity was the lowest between ages 35 to 44 with almost two out of every five men involved. While young adults between 15 to 24 years were the highest with more than half of this group participating regularly in physical activity, there was an increasing trend from the middle age groups with more men, 65 years and older, doing regular physical activity.
On the other hand, more than half of the female population between ages 35 to 64 did regular physical activity. The young women (ages 15-24) and the aged citizens (65 and above) were the least group to do physical activity. Interestingly, while the regularity of physical activity was lower in middle age groups for men and higher for women, there was an almost similar proportion in males and females aged 65 years and above.
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- Describe the bar chart 11
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'age'.
Suggestion: age
...ular physical activity. The young women ages 15-24 and the aged citizens 65 and abov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50513196348 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9817894659 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.714285714 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399430204056 0.215688989381 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214856133669 0.103423049105 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070992428234 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276088505705 0.15604864568 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611801542571 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.