In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Some nations have seen an increase in the average weight of their citizens as well as a significant deterioration in their fitness level and health status. The main cause of this phenomenon is the lack of balance between the dietary intake and level of regular physical activities, and a viable solution is to improve public awareness on the need to maintain an equilibrium between what they eat and the activities they do.
The dynamics of recent times have caused a shift in the calorie content of food ingested and the activities performed in an inverse manner. Despite the dietary modification seen in most meals consumed nowadays, which are of high energy content, there is an incidental rise in sedentary lifestyles. People consume more energy-giving food and they expend less energy. The excess calorie from this imbalance is converted to fat, which is responsible for the weight increase seen in people. For instance, most grandparents consumed more vegetables and were involved in farming activities which take up their strength in the past. However, with job automation and the ease of accomplishing tasks, less energy is used despite increase calorie content.
In order to solve this predicament, striking a balance between energy generated from consumed food and energy spent on activities is very pertinent. This can be done by increasing publicity of this imbalance, highlighting the mechanism of adding weight in the layman’s term and laying emphasis on the need to do more exercise and eat less calorie content food. Most people are oblivious to this change. To illustrate, health promotion and education has been proven to be tools that can be used to modify the lifestyle of a population.
To conclude, it is high time the public become aware of this worrying overweight menace as well as the poor health status which emerge mainly from an imbalance between what they eat and the inactive lifestyles in vogue. Doing this will not only bring to the fore this problem but also show them the need to ensure there is an equilibrium between these two opposing forces.
- Some people say that the only reason for earning a foreign language Is In order to travel to or work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your own 73
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much 73
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development 61
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an inverse manner" with adverb for "inverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d ingested and the activities performed in an inverse manner. Despite the dietary modification seen ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74034022987 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529069767442 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8540371807 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.142857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186683726584 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634011044989 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584890752943 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12202201025 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639968767285 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.