The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females doing regular physical activities in 6 different categories of age group in 2010. Units were measured in percentage.
Overall,it can be immediately obvious that the percentage of women in the age group 45 to 54 registered the highest figure. Besides, there were more females who did regular exercise than males in all mentioned age groups with the exception of the 15- to 24-year-old age group.
Looking at details, the percentage of women doing physical activities in the age group 45 to 54 stood at 53,3 percent as opposed to 45,1 percent for men. A similar thing was witnessed in the percentage of 35- to 44-year-old age group with 52,5 percent for females and 39,5 percent for males. The proportion of Australian women was also higher than men in the age of 55 to 64 and in the age of 25 to 34 with about 53 % and 54,1% respectively for the first category and 48,9% and 42,2% for the second.
Furthermore, the only age group which had the percentage for men higher than for women was the 15- to 24-year-old group with 58,2% for men and 47,7% for women. Besides, in the age group of 65 and over, the proportion for females took up 47,1%, which was higher 0,4% compared to the percentage for males.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6814159292 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6608367123 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473451327434 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.637394769 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.555555556 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349833295451 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159988719496 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110174659119 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241789410243 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768363952099 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.