The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The graph illustrates information about the proportion of Australian male and female in different age ranges who had physical exercise frequently in 2010.
Overall, it is clear to see that the percentage of Australian women who engaged in regular physical activity was higher than men from the age 25 to over 65s. Exceptionally, only the proportion of men in the age group 15 to 24 was higher than women in 2010.
In women, the rate of doing frequent physical exercises of the age groups of 35-44, 45-54 and 55-64 was over a half and under a half was the percentage of the age ranges of 15-24, 25-34 and after 64.
In men, the highest proportion of male who took part in physical activity was in the age range 15-24 with 52.8%. In contrast, the age range 35-44 had the lowest rate at just under 40%. The rest of the age groups had the percentage around 45%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... was in the age range 15-24 with 52.8%. In contrast, the age range 35-44 had the l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55769230769 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5076067706 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50641025641 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3208760076 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348527369822 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180994642069 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808271225301 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227124126031 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775866104929 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.