the bar chart illustrates the ratio of sports activity that is done by Australian men and women in different age groups in 2010. In this study 6 different age groups have been chosen and these groups are 15 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 44, 45 to 54, 55 to 64 and 65 and over. Moreover, this ratio has been given by percentage.
Overall, the maximum and minimum percentage of females who did sports activity in this observation, observed in 45 to 54 and 65 and over age groups, respectively. On the other hand, the maximum percentage in men was seen in first group (15 to 24) and minimum percentage was in 35 to 44 years old group.
As bar chart indicates, the maximum ratio of men who did sports activity was in first group by 52.8% and the minimum proportion was by 39.5% in third age group. Although, in first 3 age group there was a significant stepdown, in next 3 groups this level was stay in approximately 45%.
Furthermore, the maxima and minima ratio of females were observed in 4th and last groups by 53.3 and 47.1%. as bar chart shows females by getting older did physical activity more till 54 years old but after that they did sport activity lesser and the ratio decreased to minimum level.
- The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 67
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 84
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the bar chart illustrates the ratio of spor...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'step-down'?
Suggestion: step-down
...rst 3 age group there was a significant stepdown, in next 3 groups this level was stay i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
... 4th and last groups by 53.3 and 47.1%. as bar chart shows females by getting olde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45701357466 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53192389357 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493212669683 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2013608042 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390998649065 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171840265624 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138356414728 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236737391081 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387492727143 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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