This bar graph represents the unemployment rate of graduate male and female around 20 to 24 years of age in one European country between 2008 and 2009. Overall, it is apparent that the number of unemployed graduates has greatly increased in the given period, more specifically in the male category.
To begin with, 10% of men and about 7.5% of women were noted to be jobless in January 2008. There was a slight declined of percentage noticed in the month of April around 5.5% to 6.5% respectively. This level remained unchanged for few months and then dramatically rose in October approximately 10% for females and 15% for males were still not working.
However, January 2009 experienced a moderate decreased in the number of unemployed graduate women reaching below 10% and even continued to lower down in April having similar rate from the previous year.Same with women, unemployment percentage of men has declined in January less than 15% but unlike females, the pattern stayed constant in April for males. Interestingly, a significant rose of work-less women can be seen in July at 10% and continued in an upward trend reaching nearly 15% whilst, men dropped slightly about 12%. Nevertheless, the total number of out-of-work male graduate has doubled and ended the last quarter of the year peaking over 20%.
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of unemployed graduates, aged 20-24, in one European country over a two-year period. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re noted to be jobless in January 2008. Although, there was a slight declined of percent...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Same
...ing similar rate from the previous year.Same with women, unemployment percentage of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, still, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05963302752 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76186790361 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1535250333 43.030603864 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.875 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170980008549 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752454954791 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902389758798 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124212694096 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972039900973 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.