The given bar chart illustrates how much coffee purchased from the two types and visit to cafe for tea or coffee in previous one month by the people of five various metropolitan of Australia. The units are measured in percentage.
Overall, majority of people prefer to visit cafe for either coffee or tea and in the case of purchase, the proportion of indtand coffe is more than fresh coffee.
Analyzing the trend of fresh coffee, nearly 43% amount observed in both Sydney and Melbourne. Following them, Hobart noticed less than 49%. While, remaining both the cosmopolitans have equal proportion with below 35%.
On the other hand, the scale of instant coffee bought by the consumer is different for each cities. In which Sydney, Melbourne and Adelaid are in between 50% and 45% and remaining both are at above 50%.
For coffee and tea more individuals visited cafe in all five urban areas except Adelaide which is at bottom with slight less than 50%. Wheres, Hobart, Melbourne and Sydney are in the range of 60% to 65%; in which Melbourne is at paramount position with almost 64%. More than 55% public have preferred to went cafe for coffee or tea in Brisbane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing them, Hobart noticed less than 49%. While, remaining both the cosmopolitans have ...
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Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Where's
...is at bottom with slight less than 50%. Wheres, Hobart, Melbourne and Sydney are in th...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent cafe for coffee or tea in Brisbane
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82587064677 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41991604473 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572139303483 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5866229059 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0349191231708 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0124364020713 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279956433941 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0223313245109 0.15604864568 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330988857522 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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