The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart reveal the information regarding top ten countries in industry product and consumption electricity .
Overall , china was the most popular production and consumption in electricity . Korea rep was the smallest in fields production and consumption . manufacturing sector electricity of all countries is higher than that of consumption , with the exception belonging to Germany .
It is noticeable that china and united state was top countries in production sector and use electricity and china always leads in both fields. china, united state and Russia always produced and consumed electricity above 1000 billion kwh . manufacturing sector electricity in china was marginally higher consumption with 5398 billion kwh and 5322 billion kwh respectively . Likely , product sector electricity in united state and Russia also was slightly larger than consumption electricity with 4099 billion kwh and 3866 billion kwh and 1057kwh compared 1038 kwh respectively .
It clear that citizen japan , India , Canada , France , brazil , Germany and Korea rep produced and consumed electricity always under 1000 billion kwh . Inhabitant in japan was less common consume than product electricity with 936,2 and 856,7 billion kwh respectively less Canada resident use electricity than product electricity with 618,9 compared 499,9 billion kwh . Similar patterns was evident France , brazil and Korea rep . The reverse was true for Germany when people Germany consumed electricity was slightly higher than product electricity .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88181818182 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01660911547 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431818181818 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4918121598 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 1.69756097561 2474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180875203833 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10076985409 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965211105792 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187659398153 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123389115111 0.0819641961636 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 11.4140731707 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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