The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart compares ten countries in terms of the production and spending of electricity in the year 2014.
It is clear that China is the only country produce and spend electricity highest on the all-time electricity chart. It is noticeable that the opposite was true for Korea and Rep.
The China has produce a total of 5.398 billion kWh and expenditure 5,322 billion kWh, this country has the highest proportion in the total ten national. In second place on the all-time electricity chart is the United States with just over 4000 kWh in production and less than 4000 in consuming electric.
The figure for Korea and Rep were 485,1 kWh and 449,5 kWh; while those for Russia stood at 1057 kWh and 1038 kWh. Besides that, Korea and Rep are two countries has he figure for consumption less than that for production, at 449,5 kWh and 485,1 kWh, respectively. Other countries, namely Japan, India, Canada, Brazil, France and Germany tend to be fairly similar.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'electricity the highest'.
Suggestion: electricity the highest
...a is the only country produce and spend electricity highest on the all-time electricity chart. It i...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'national' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nationals'.
Suggestion: nationals
...the highest proportion in the total ten national. In second place on the all-time electr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5141947797 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9693798094 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268984394145 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137284614517 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134985112646 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212204855619 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136880306625 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.