The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph gives information about the amount of produced and consummated electricity by ten different countries in 2014.
Overall, it can be concluded from the chart that all countries, including the leaders China and the United States, had produced more electricity than consummated, except for Germany that consummated 586.5 KWh than produced.
From the figures, it can be inferred that China had both produced and consummated electricity with more than 1000 kWh from the United States. Moreover, Russia took the third place by 1.057 kWh production with a modest difference in the consumption of Japan by less than around 150 kWh.
Followed by India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea, Rep., the usage of electricity was not so different, except for Korea, which had taken the lowest position with difference by more than 400 kWh than Japan and India. And Germany, which had more consummated electrical energy than any other country in that year.
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- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, third, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26451612903 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68757498746 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.269146338 43.030603864 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.2 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119950101619 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858354610962 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686297361623 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976161717922 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707148050983 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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