The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Submitted by Tee Dos on Tue, 07/16/2019 - 04:02

The given bar chart provides information about the ten highest producers and consumers of electricity around the world in the year 2014. The unit of measurement is in billion kWh.

Overall, it is clear that almost all the countries generated more electricity than the use with China leading the ranks followed by the United States and Korea, Republic being the last.

It clear that the first two countries are significantly ahead of all the other countries. Conversely, Germany is the only country that utilized more than it produced in that given year.
In details, China which ranked the highest generated 5398 billion kWh of electricity and utilized 5322 billion kWh. This is followed by the USA at 4099 billion kWh in production and had a reserve of 233 billion kWh and Russia tiered in 3rd place has an almost equal amount of production and consumption at 1057 billion kWh and 1038 billion kWh respectively.

However, the next ordered top five countries Japan, India, Canada, France and Brazil in descending order had similar patterns of less than 1000 billion kWh in production and consumption while Germany, on the other hand, placed at number nine used 64.1 billion kWh of electricity more than it generated. Lastly, Korea, Republic was ranked the least with generation at 485.1 billion kWh and consumption at 44.9 billion kWh.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...h and consumption at 44.9 billion kWh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, however, if, lastly, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08108108108 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63722485863 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.5987869773 43.030603864 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.142857143 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7142857143 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13317406965 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750753398731 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483714723676 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836262785411 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438370708041 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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