The bar chart illustrates information about the number of vehicles trips into the city center make by the citizen and non-citizen and the car journeys define the average number of voyages per day from 1996 to 2005.
Overall, the high amount of car trips make by residents in the whole periods. However, the non-residents was fluctuated from the beginning to end of the year.
In regards, in 1996 the inhabitants were making a significant amount car trips per day which was around 9800 and in 1997 it was slightly decreased and reached more approximately 9100 and again in the year of 1998 it was reached at the same number of journeys which was in noticeable in 1996. After 1999 it was dramatically declined and in 2000 it was half and the number of trips per day was 5000 then the residents trips was fluctuated and the last year it was measured 4000.
Secondly, the non-citizen in 1996 was very less trips per day which was 5000 then it was raised up till 1999 which was 8000 then in the year of 2000 and 2001 the trips measured the same which was 8000 then it was decreased and last year it was reached at the same number of trips which was in 1996.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... end of the year. In regards, in 1996 the inhabitants were making a significan...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
...mber of trips per day was 5000 then the residents trips was fluctuated and the last year ...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun trips is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ondly, the non-citizen in 1996 was very less trips per day which was 5000 then it wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48113207547 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.431895422 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405660377358 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.0176324606 43.030603864 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.333333333 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 22.9334400587 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126570164131 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109144352358 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916323911304 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134649553364 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10699383754 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.