The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010

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The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010

Bar chart shows the average of books from library which were borrowed by people in Lammertown Public Library between 1991 and 2001. The pie chart indicates data about library's membership in 2010.

Overall, there are seven types of books from Lammertown Library. On the top of the favored books is Romances which is the most interesting while reading 400 books. Moreover, language books were the lowest by borrowing and people who get them in average made up 100 people between 1991 and 2001.

In more details, at the end of 20's century, people borrowed less amount of books than in 2001. In addition, the most stable genre amongst seven all books was Autobiographies, due to the disinterest of people in life of celebrities and scientists. As compared with 1991 the number of book which has been borrowed are rised in 2001. The aforementioned Romance books were the most prominent which was 1000 books in 1991 and 1400 in 2001.

To conclude, in pie chart, obviously seen that the gender constituents of library members. Although, more than half of pie chart it is approximately 68% women readers and left over are men.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...2001. In addition, the most stable genre amongst seven all books was Autobiograph...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in life of celebrities and scientists. As compared with 1991 the number of book w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9057591623 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.620187394 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565445026178 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4037312665 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1818181818 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370151676197 0.215688989381 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153658165637 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138951661593 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252627151435 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.195565930709 0.0819641961636 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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