The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010

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The bar chart gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010

<span style="color: rgb(68, 68, 68); font-family: &quot;Open Sans&quot;, &quot;Helvetica Neue&quot;, sans-serif; font-size: 14px; white-space: normal;">The bar chart compares the quantity of books borrowed from Lammertown public library in two years 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart shows data about the percentage of people who were members of Lammertown public library in terms of gender in the year 2010.</span>

Overall, there are seven types of books from Lammertown Library. On the top of the favored books is Romances which is the most interesting while reading (number). Moreover, language books were the lowest by borrowing and people who get them in average made up 100 people between 1991 and 2001.

In more details, at the end of 20's century, people borrowed less amount of books than in 2001. In addition, the most stable genre amongst seven all books was Autobiographies, due to the (незаинтересованность) of people in life of celebrities and scientists. As compared with 1991 the number of book which has been borrowed are rised in 2001. The aforementioned Romance books were the most prominent which was 1000 books in 1991 and 1400 in 2001.

If we look to pie chart, we can see the gender constituents of library members. Although, more than half of pie chart it is approximately 68% women readers and left over are men.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...2001. In addition, the most stable genre amongst seven all books was Autobiograph...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in life of celebrities and scientists. As compared with 1991 the number of book w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27981651376 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.87770990685 2.65546596893 146% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591743119266 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 123.02162813 43.030603864 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.888888889 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323082464381 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112296374359 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768239346333 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175823335532 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600071630846 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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