The bar graph depicts the information about taking part in various games likewise, Tennis, Cycling, Baseball, volleyball, Swimming, Ice hockey, Golf, and many more by Canadian citizens in the years 1998 and 2005.
To begin with, the most popular sport in Canada is golf because above 20% people are participate in this game. It obtain the highest rates in the both years. Although baseball game extremely famous among the people in the year 1998 and it got about 17% rating, in 2005 the rating of baseball game just 6% it is very less ration rather than first year. Ice hockey is extremely popular in the whole time period and in both years it obtains nearby 17%, it is the second-highest rating.
Moreover, four games get a similar ratio of participation in Canada. This four games are tennis, cycling, volleyball and alpine skiing. In years 1998 and 2005 this all sports get rating in between 5% to 10%. In the swimming 14% people participating in the first year and in next year 10% people take part in this game in next year.
To conclude, people give the more preference to golf, ice hockey and swimming in couple of year. Apart from this, tennis, cycling and other game are less popular among the participants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, likewise, moreover, second, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7641509434 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42834293554 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542452830189 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6581477542 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8181818182 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108429264647 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515421371421 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504921441841 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690753835698 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399892232029 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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