In recent times, the majority of people especially children are interesting in play video games rather than outdoor activities. However, some people believe that outside activities are more crucial for kids instead of playing video games. I am totally agree with this statement and in this essay, I will give the appropriate reasons in further paragraphs.
To begin with, nowadays the trends of playing computerized games are rapidly rising among children. The outdoor activities are extremely important for kids because it brings a lot of benefits. One of the major benefits is that if young people perform outdoor activities such as outdoor sports so it helps to enhance their physical as well as mental strength. To explicate, a child who participates in sports and other outdoor activities so they have a better physical and mental ability rather than those kids who play digital games. Another benefit is that, if children are taking a part in these activities they also build the new relationships in society and it also develops their interpersonal skills.
Apart from this, although video games are better options for only entertainment purposes, they have harmful effects on child health. If a kid spend a lot of time to playing video games it directly generate the harmful impact on the eye side as well as on human brain. Take the recent report of the world health organization (WHO) as an example, research report of WHO claim that, 65% of eye and brain issues are faced by those children who play video games rather than those who are participating in outdoor activities.
To conclude, If children take a part in outdoor activities so they can be developed new skills as well as make new relations in the society. Secondly, those children also face less health issues as comparison who are playing videogames.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04620462046 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68966976269 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518151815182 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7362810965 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270271564611 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10559368307 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776180433033 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172616497717 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648562435707 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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