The line graph depicts the information about the spending on British children's sports activities by their parents from 2008 to 2014 and children were participated in the three different categories.
Overall, every month British parents were spending the huge amount on their children's sports over the 6 year period. A lot of participants also took part in different games such as swimming, football and athletics. Football was considerably popular rather than another two games.
To begin with, At the beginning of the period parents were spending 20 pounds monthly on their children's games and this amount was gradually increased in the following next six years. in the last, approximately 30 pounds spend on children's sports by British parents
Moreover, in 2008 nearly 8 million participants took part in swimming and less than 1 million children play athletics. On the other hand, approximately 8 million children play football, which obtained the highest position among the other games in the first year. In the next three years, the number of football participants remained similar. Participation in swimming almost double in the year 2014. After 2010, athletic participants nearby the 5 million.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...reased in the following next six years. in the last, approximately 30 pounds spend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45502645503 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8405159947 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9361242848 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307176270938 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119740768063 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107571396641 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20804183642 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886212432755 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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