In recent time, majority of people leave their home country and immigrate to other place and this has a significant impact on society. This essay will explain the main reason of immigration as well as it is consequences.
To begin with, overall the world, most of the people want to move in other countries, it has a lot of reasons. one of the major reason is that people want to live in developed country for better life style. People belive that, if they immigrate to other nation so they search better job oppouritiues and get the higher income. Which helps to secure their future and enhance the quality of living. Take Indian people as an example, The Indian citizens especially
youngstars are move to other countries such as Canada, Austraila and England because indian people get high packages jobs in these developed nations and they live lixuary lifestyle rather than that life live in India. Another reason is that numerous students give preference to immigration in the whole world. Sometimes students want to get specilization in their praticular field but they do not have any study in their own nation so they decided to move other coutry for completing their education. After that they will receive a lot of opportunities in future.
On the other hand, despite having the a lot of benefits, immigration also carry few consequences. Firstly, when people move and do job in other nations as consequences the economy of home nation will be decline and it face a lot of fincial troubles in future. Secondly, immigration also becomes a problem for other countries in which people are start living. Numerous people start living in foreign countries which are caused by increasing population as well as they occupy the job of local people.
To conclude, people are able to secure their future and live a better life style when they live in a developed country. Immigration is not only a problem for the home country but also a huge issue for foreign countries and their local citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89705882353 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59973880775 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467647058824 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0204286795 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119959070138 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562472422326 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633220573052 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925414786529 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737266991463 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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