Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences can it lead?
In the past, many immigrations had occurred from animals to human for shelters, resources and discovering new lands. Nowadays, people still leave there home town to study, work and find new place to live. Some people say that immigration cause a big problem to the society and people should avoid that. However, some people claim an opposite statement that exodus won't affect our society much. In this essay, I will give out the explanations why people want to migrate and the result of that.
From my point of view, there are many arguments for the migrating and one of the major reason is finding new jobs or studying. People in developing and under developed countries try to study abroad of join the working environment in the foreign developed countries. The high standard of living in rich countries will create the better environment for academy and more opportunities to start a new employment. As the result, the whole family's lives would increase due to high income and better environment they are living in. Additionally, many people, especially the ones come from the country that has the conflict which could end their lives whatever it wants. They need to run away from their country to find a safer places. For instance, the civil war in Syria has made millions of people left their home to find new nations such as Turkey and Germany to live. That action causes many results to two countries.
Some relocations bring the positive perspective. For example, the immigration of Jew to the USA bring some talents such as Einstein to America which contributes to the nation science. Moreover, many people from poor countries are able to develop their own strength which cannot be promoted in their home town due to the lacks of materials. They could help the countries they move in have more skillful employee. Although some good aspect immigration would do, there are many drawbacks from the colonization which shows in the result of both immigrants and their countries of destination. Firstly, most of the refugees cannot find jobs because of the lack of language skills, culture and abilities to join in manufacturing process. Each country have different solutions to solve this matter. Some countries deny the arriving of immigrants to protect their citizens and environment. Others open assistance center for refugees to help them achieve some basic skill. Furthermore, authorities need to provide them food, health care and shelter which cause a great amount of money, time and human to take care. Secondly, evacuees usually increase the rate of society’s vibes. According to some newspapers, the number of theft, murdering and shoplifting in Germany have risen due to the program that accept immigrants from Africa. At the end, it stresses out the society because of the burden they need to maintain is too large.
In conclusion, people always want a more peaceful and full life and this is reason for people to settle to the unknown land. However, life after immigration may not always meet people’s expectations. People need to define the decision when they want to go to absolutely new area is worth or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37142857143 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82393398907 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631746031746 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9497316624 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197273941116 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577981788082 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705725651114 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115316500528 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421194643282 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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