The diagram shows the procedure of making chocolate.
At the first step, the chocolate making process start from the cacao tree which are planted most in ideal area such as South America, Africa and Indonesia. Once the tree is grown up and its cacaos turns into the ripe red pods, the pods are collected by the farmers. After collecting the cacao, people cut through the pod and white beans inside the cacao is exposed which are used for the next stage. White cacao beans are fermented before people spread it on a large tray to dry them under the hot sun.
Next, the dried beans are put in the large sacks for storing the beans, loaded on train or lorry and transported to the factory. Then, the dried beans are roasted under the heat of 350 degree Fahrenheit. After roasted, the beans are moved to the crusher to crush it into the outer shell which is removed from the process and the inner part is used. At the last stage, the inner part is pressed into the liquid chocolate product and used for later goods.
Overall, after 10 man-made process, the cacao on the cacao tree is performed into the production of liquid chocolate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55882352941 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07792261624 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563725490196 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6843393054 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0405008229218 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0209182118518 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034329728279 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0310928073064 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103227104694 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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