In this cutting-edge era, technology play vital role in human life. Nowadays, each and every people dependent on it. This electronica components have numerous advantages but on the one hand it also have few disadvantages. In this essay, I shall put down the both negative and positive impacts of technology.
To commence with, today human beings live in robotic era. No doubt, telecommunication make the easy life for masses. However, it has few negative aspects like smart gadgets are used for inaccurate purpose by wrong mentality people. As consequences, problems will be faced by ample of people. Secondly, lot of usage of smart things also create the detrimental impact on human body as well as ample of serious disease will be faced by people. In addition, this electronica components generate harmful radiations or waves in nature as a result, this waves are very dangerous for creatures.
On the contrary, no one can deny human being living in computer age. It have innumerable positive impact. It play the crucial role for complete the work in very less time period. Today, people get the success in each and every field day-by-day this all achievement possible with the help of technology. To explicate, in this contemporary era, people live in very fast life. They want finish their all work in very less time duration. So, science play the great role for making the fast and productive life. Apart from this, people get the new knowledge about this universe everyday. To instance, people go to outer space and get the knowledge about other planets, and many more. Furthermore, during this pandemic, whole work are done by people at home. it possible with the help of technology. So, i think technology have a more advantage rather than disadvantages. it is very beneficial for each and every people.
To conclude, technology are very helpful for get success in each and every field. While, the incorrect use of technology make the problem of other person
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, i think, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04747774481 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78475055259 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548961424332 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.337479242 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3181818182 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3181818182 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193469407194 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629434343136 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051966042886 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116103719742 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493245710678 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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