In this cutting-edge era, growth in cities as well as in populations are rapidly increasing and for the higher authorities, it is a cumbersome task to control this rapid growth. As consequence, natural beauty spots are losing by many countries because they do not protect those wonderful places. If the government protect these places so, in the upcoming time, we can receive a lot of benefits. I will discuss that benefits alongside give the appropriate method to protect natural spots.
To begin with, although the development of cities is a positive thing for the growth of the economy, it jeopardizes the natural sites. Despite in many nations governments making various laws for protecting these locations, still, those nations are losing their natural places. If we give the more attention to protect these natural beauty spots as a result, in future we can recieve several advantages. One of the major benefits is that natural places are extremely essential to reduce environmental issues. To explicate, in the natural places a lot of plants and trees grown, and they reduce the air pollution, maintain the water level as well as reduce the soil pollution. For instance, today in many countries' government makes hard and fast rule related to the natural places. Researchers claim that in those countries environmental problems are immensely less rather than those nations who losing their natural places. Government must make strict laws to protect those sites such as no one can do the construction work nearby the natural places and many more.
Moreover, these places having a lot of financial benefits. Natural beauty spots are the centre of attraction for tourists. In other words, mostly visitors love to visit natural beauty locations. If a nation protects its natural location so more people visit those places and they generate the revenue for the government. Take a recent research as an example, According to recent research, many tourists visit India because in India there are a lot of natural places and every year thousands of tourists visit those locations. Indian government collect the huge amount of fund though those natural places.
To conclude, natural beauty sites have several benefits not only for the environment but also for the national economy. So, today government must be paid more attention to protect the places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 704, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...te the revenue for the government. Take a recent research as an example, According to recent rese...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1968503937 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67612300227 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485564304462 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.202715872 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.05 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360862166916 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121687295318 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590097225708 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237109906835 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650542432138 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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