The bar chart shows the divorce rate into European countries from 2011 to 2015
The designed bar histogram beneath proclaims the enlightenment of divorce rates for 5 years in Finland and Sweden.
It is perceptible from the stated bar chart that in the year 2011 the rate of divorce in Finland is nearly 38% where as in Sweden that is about 44%. In the next year, divorce rate went up rapidly in Sweden by 5 percent and in peer country steady decline is observed almost of 2%.
However, from the year 2013 to 2014 a gradual reduction in divorce rate is observed in Sweden and vice versa in Finland. Finally, in 2015 it is nearly 35% and 42% in two European countries.
Overall, we can obivious from the given chart that onward 2013, a dramatic rise in divorce rate in Finland where as Sweden marked drop in that group constantly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 622.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57352941176 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41619929458 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3181779031 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336831263383 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166852060581 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593481673335 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199314427056 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553421622145 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.