Some people that fashion effects our lives in a negative way.However , others say that it has more postive effects on our lives. discuss your opinion
In today's world fashion has enormous effect on our daily lives.It has already created a fad to trend in human history.In my view , vogue has both positive and negative effects on people's lives.
Fashion has following positive effects. Firstly, It is generating employment across the world as well as growing the economy of various nations like India , china and Italy. Secondly, providing a platform to millions of pupils to represent their views , thoughts and ideas in the form of creative arts and designs moreover giving chance to work with business tycoons and large retail chains to show their talent in the fashion industry.Lastly wearing a new cloth for updating our self with the fashion trend makes personal feel younger and motivated in their Lifestyle additionally owning fashion also provides status in the society.
On the other hand fashion also creates negative effects on people's lives. Firstly, for instance excessive use of cosmetics on the face creates plethora of health hazards .Secondly ,sometimes people do not have financial stability but they wear luxurious and costly brands to show lavish lifestyle. Moreover after certain. What time you struggle with the Indigence and anxiety problems. Lastly ,opting too much fashion and Its trends make personal different from society and it develops negative perception as well as folk tales towards the person.
To reiterate, I would say if fashion followed wisely it will create nice impact and good judgement otherwise if it adopted blindly definitely it would generate financial and instability and several health and mental effects.
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also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36363636364 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59544078457 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664031620553 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.182019792 49.4020404114 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.7 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213959540202 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852947053941 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114286449004 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134511019677 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916225475955 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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