The given bar chart illustrates the selling of various types of digital games around the world during six years period from 2000 to 2006.
Overall, selling of handheld games increased over these years, however, console games experienced decreasing trend during the same years. In addition, sales of online and mobile games started in 2001 and 2002 respectively, which also experienced greater sales with each passing year.
In 2000, handheld games were sold around eleven billion dollars which gradually increased to reach to at around eighteen billion in the final year. In contrary, console games suffered fall in its sales that reached to about half of six billion dollars, which was its sales in the beginning year.
On the other hand, sales of online and mobile games across the globe were not observed in 2000. The selling of online games, however, were observed immediately in the following year with the sales of around one billion that rose by around eight times in the final year. A year later of online games, the sales of mobile games were also observed. It had similar sales like that of online games in its starting year and increased its selling gradually to about seven billion dollars at the end which was about two billion dollars less than the selling of online games.
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... six years period from 2000 to 2006. Overall, selling of handheld games incre...
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...reater sales with each passing year. In 2000, handheld games were sold around...
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...und eighteen billion in the final year. In contrary, console games suffered fall i...
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...was its sales in the beginning year. On the other hand, sales of online and m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97695852535 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23056708167 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479262672811 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.230877232 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269749521845 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130874072877 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646988960452 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188469449841 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637170926597 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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