The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph represents the three computer packages that were
downloaded over a period of five weeks. The computer packages
are ActiveX, Java and Net.
To start the first week, ActiveX gained the highest number of downloads
at 75,000. It was followed by Java, which is under 30, 000 downloads
compared to ActiveX. Both the computer packages shared the same
increasing trend with the exception of ActiveX's slight decrease during
the forth week. The two computer packages ended the last week with
120,000 downloads for ActiveX and just above 80,00 downloads for Java.
The least popular downloaded computer package however is the Net. It
started of at only 35,000 downloads during the first week, a 40,000 difference
from the leading computer package. It continued to decline up to the third
week, reaching its lowest number of downloads at 20,000. Although its
decrease on the first three weeks, the download rate rose to a significant
number on the fourth week and ending the period at 50,000.
Overall, it is clearly evident that ActiveX maintained its popularity all throughout
the course of five weeks. The least downloaded package among the three however
is the Net.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2016-07-10 | manpreet135 | 68 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ages shared the same increasing trend with the exception of ActiveXs slight decrease during the f...
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...ption of ActiveXs slight decrease during the forth week. The two computer package...
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... It continued to decline up to the third week, reaching its lowest number of down...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'third']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253521126761 0.268076937826 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.117370892019 0.116061578633 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.093896713615 0.0759168565197 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0281690140845 0.0366838410393 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0328638497653 0.0131127313244 251% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12676056338 0.155750635184 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0328638497653 0.0379272487307 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43716162205 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234741784038 0.0210936926555 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.131455399061 0.0948980150116 139% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0093896713615 0.00967000014798 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1198.0 1161.00487805 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.9 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20725388601 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39896373057 0.337110787985 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.300518134715 0.247514529752 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20725388601 0.171178102325 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0932642487047 0.112407865282 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43716162205 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549222797927 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 48.8015951734 49.3433353143 99% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0833333333 23.0094962315 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0730640896 42.9750493124 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8333333333 135.714022679 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 23.0094962315 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.689975730869 48% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 3.84146341463 443% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 8.0 1.48048780488 540% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.1351468048 47.7609492067 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.31578947368 2.94281807926 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.514253972958 0.418131533498 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141235697729 0.181151798455 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645125710278 0.0850326197045 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.7763491391 0.706616315825 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.238374487143 0.157042692854 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.268679072116 0.228904883108 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120539216499 0.108899403657 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0616451549592 0.367819155151 17% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0808251087036 0.0812612215331 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225327863846 0.316326947829 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147263876772 0.0921553760075 160% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.