The bar chart illustrates the trend of downloading various computer packages per week over the periods of five weeks.
Overall, a glimpse of graph indicates that ActiveX was predominantly downloaded package while Net accounted for least number of downloading.
To begin, ActiveX started from around 80,000 downloads per week followed by Java which was bought only about 40,000 times. After that, purchase of Java escalated consistently until end of timeline while popularity of ActiveX showed a slight drop in week 3. However, it regained its momentum quickly and peaked to 120,000 in week 5.
In terms of Net, a variable pattern can be observed. In comparison with other two, the frequency of Net package usage remained below 40,000 until week 3 where it had declined up to 250,000. However, in week 5 it had exceeded these figures reaching significantly above 40,000 download per week.
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 67
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers while others think that this is the role of parents Discuss both sides and give your opinion 71
- The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types. 61
- Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.Discuss both side and give your opinion? 73
- Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as tv, friends and music. Others believe that family still remains very important.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: comparison,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74106819709 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5928095152 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.375 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223347559719 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996574767821 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100237276686 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158662769211 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111249821326 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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