The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words

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The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words

The bar chart illustrates, the amount of annual visitors in national gallery, Victoria and Albert museum, and British museum in London from 2007 to 2012. Units are measured in millions.

Overall, it has been clear from the graph that, there were many fluctuations in visitors over the six years in three museums. While, the number of visitors increased in national gallery and the amount of visitors declined in Victoria and Albert museum. Whereas, British museum makes up the tourist number after some reduction in first year.

In 2007 and 2008 the total count of guests in Victoria and Albert museum was the highest position (approximately 13 million) among the other museums. However, there were moderate reduction in numbers of visitors in the following years and reached to about 7 million in 2010. While, for the next two years the proportion of tourists slightly went up and finished to 10 million at the end of the period.

National gallery account for the lowest number of visitors in 2007 with around 6 million. Whilst, British museum has nearly 13 million visitors at the beginning period which plummet to just above 6 million by 2009 and remained relatively stable with below 10 million up to 2010. Moreover, the visitation data of national gallery and British museum were surged in the next consecutive years and finished to about 16 million and 14 million in 2012.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4683070099 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502164502165 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0840702274 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173192727745 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761253716923 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580438565335 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128477936615 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524832703396 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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