The graph below shows the Alcohol-related deaths in 7 different countries and the average beer consumption in 2005.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the description of the correlation of the table that follows.
The table illustrates, mortality related to alcohol consumption of people in seven various countries in 2005 and along with that overall intake of beer in liters by 2002.
In general, death occurs mostly among males than females in all the given countries. While, beer consumption rate was more in people from Czeh republic.
As is observed, more than one million people from Czeh republic and Germany were died in the year of 2005 by the usage of alcohol. Firstly, Czeh republic, death data figured it on males with 900,000 and females with 469,000. Germany was the other significant country with huge death rate by alcohol which is total of 1,185,000( males 986,000 and females 200,000).h Austria positioned third level in the death rate with near one million. Whereas, Estonia and Lithuania accounts for below half million in that lithuania was the lowest such as, 125,000 with both genders 112,000 and 13,000 respectively which is among the smallest record.Moreover, Canada and Ireland demonstrates almost same figure of death with above 500,00 people in total over the given period.
On the other hand, all the given countries has more than 100 liters of beer consumed in 2002 except, canada, estonia, and lithuania. Canada was the lowest position in beer consumption with 86 liters which is five liter lower than lithuania and 12 than estonia. Consumption rate of beer in the country of Ireland, Germani and Austria has 104,107,and 106 liter respectively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, third, whereas, while, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13389121339 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55317907944 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52719665272 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4913281454 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.7 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 5.23603664747 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149003885164 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750270048403 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558006839743 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119477062443 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635071404196 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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