the bar chart shows the sales figures and profits of ABC electronics in million of US dollars over the period 1991 to 2000. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. you should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart provided below, reveals informations about annual sales figures of an electronic company in addition to its profits, in millions of US dollars in a decade. A glance at this chart shows that sales figures are by far much more than profits in each year.
it is also clear that, the company's sales figures were gradually growing during this period of time except for two years (1994 and 1996). Meanwhile, the amount of its profits fluctuated over time and raised to 16 million dollars at 1997 and then started to decline to 11 and 12 million dollars in the next tree years.
it is interesting to note that, the ABC electronics company benefits the most at 1997, with 16 million dollars of profits. However this year was not the best year in terms of sales figures.
At 1999 the company's sales figures was by far the highest amount of sales figures in this period of time. On the other hand, 1991 with less than 100 million dollars of sales figures and 8 million dollars of annual profits had the lowest function and benefits in this decade.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...r much more than profits in each year. it is also clear that, the companys sales ...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ures were gradually growing during this period of time except for two years 1994 and 1996. Mea...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...illion dollars in the next tree years. it is interesting to note that, the ABC el...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...97, with 16 million dollars of profits. However this year was not the best year in term...
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Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...highest amount of sales figures in this period of time. On the other hand, 1991 with less than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, then, while, except for, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61170212766 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27392839367 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547872340426 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7506208558 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.375 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296147699033 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13997827948 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597388441991 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196367078792 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629380420006 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.