The bar chart shows the sales figures and profits of ABC Electronics in millions of US dollars over the period 1991 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart gives information about 2 income figures (sales and revenue) in an electronics company over a period of a decade. Units are measured in million US dollars.
Overall, sales were much higher than that of profits. While an increasing trend for sales is demonstrated, a constant and fluctuated trend can be observed for profits.
In terms of sales, the minimum and maximum sales made in 1991 and 1999 respectively. As the overall sales trend demonstrates, a significant boost of $23M in annual sales were made between 1994 and 1995. Furthermore, another noteworthy increase of $15M in sales took place between 1996 and 1997 as opposed to slight decrease of $1M and $4M in yearly sales between 1995-1996 and 1999-2000, respectively.
As for the profit bars, there are no significant changes in the trends. Two minimum profits of $8M can be seen in 1991 and 1993, while the most profitable year was 1997 with $16M. By taking a closer look, it is realized that the year 1997 coincided with the year with a $15M increase in sales and an uprising in profits to the maximum amount of $16M in annual revenue.
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at le 78
- Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at le 78
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at le 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...riod of a decade. Units are measured in million US dollars. Overall, sales were much...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.765625 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75531663303 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6223686937 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169056471977 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722172185555 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605431074226 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114185492325 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892979844239 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.