the bar chart shows scores of 3 teams a, b nd c over four different seasons. summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons were relevant.
The bar chart illustrates total points of 3 different teams [ team A, team B and team I] from 2002 to 2005. it is evident that , team B scored far higher than other two teams in all four consecutive seasons.
In 2002 team B scores82 points while team A and team cC accounted far less with merely 5 points and 10 points respectively. In the first 3 seasons there was a significant decline in the points of group B from 82 to 43 points even though it managed to keep it's first place. In the fourth season , there was a noticeable increase in the points of team B to 5 points, whereas team A and team B could score only 8 and 5 points respectively.
Interestingly on the other hand , in the first two seasons group C was in second place while team A managed to report as second in 2004 and 2005. However the highest point if team a was 35 points in season three , whereas team C could score only 15 points as it's highest score in season 2
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team A, team B and team I from 2002 to 2005
team A, team B and team C from 2002 to 2005
to keep it's first place.
to keep its first place.
there was a noticeable increase in the points of team B to 5 points,
there was a noticeable increase in the points of team B to 55 points,
group C was in second place
group C was in the second place
However the highest point if team a was 35 points in season three
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
as it's highest score in season 2
as its highest score in season 2
Sentence: In 2002 team B scores82 points while team A and team cC accounted far less with merely 5 points and 10 points respectively.
Error: scores82 Suggestion: scores 82
Error: cC Suggestion: C
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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