the bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.
The bar chart gives information about the points scored by three teams over four consecutive seasons from 2002 to 2005.
Overall, there were significant differences between teams about scores. In addition, team B always set the pace although its points varied remarkably over seasons.
Despite the lowest started point in 2002, team A gained 11 points in the next season and then achieved the second position with a considerable point – 35 - in 2004 before reaching a bottom at 8 point in the final season. Among scores of team C, it saw a significant grow from 10 points in 2002 to 15 points in 2003. However, there was a slightly decrease in 2004 for its scores which led to loss its previous position. Finally, it completed the fourth season with the point of 5.
In contrast, there was a remarkable fluctuation between seasons, although the points scored by team B were always higher than other teams. In 2002, team B had 82 points which was the highest one in the whole chart. Over two next seasons, its point declined gradually from 60 in 2003 to 43 in 2004. However, team C raised its point in the final season at 55 points and still set the pace among these three teams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...o 15 points in 2003. However, there was a slightly decrease in 2004 for its scores which led to los...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, so, still, then, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67142857143 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42938037289 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5984518401 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23820017958 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110642838284 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894252485754 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201096169313 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990807512961 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.