The bar charts below show the medical research funding on some diseases and deaths caused due to them in someland in 1990

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The bar charts below show the medical research funding on some diseases and deaths caused due to them in someland in 1990

The graph show medical research financing on some diseases and deaths caused in someland in 1990.In this graph show various money expend for decline afterlife effects.moreover,medical research cash on some diseases 200million.
It can be clearly seen,In 1990 upermost backing was expands inAIDS 180million.As well as th undermost backing was expended in TB 0.20million.After that,Leprasy and tropical defect are same backing was 80million.Further more,diarrhoea diseases are less then cash expand as compare leprasy and tropical defect was 60milliin.However,Malaria endemic backing expands 50million.
Moving further,In 1990 leprasy endemic was least create downfall as 0.1to 0.2million.Although,AIDS endemic was more than leprasy lead to ending is 0.2to 0.3million.Moreover,Tropical disease,malaria and diarrhoea disorders was make 0.3 to 0.4million demise.After backing money on defects.And also TB was maximum effects to decease is 1.8million.
In 1990,AIDS upermost finacing was expand but tgey least create downfall.Further more,TB minimum cash was expand but they maximum lead to darkness.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s and deaths caused in someland in 1990.In this graph show various money expend fo...
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...d for decline afterlife effects.moreover,medical research cash on some diseases 200milli...
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...eases 200million. It can be clearly seen,In 1990 upermost backing was expands inAID...
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...t backing was expands inAIDS 180million.As well as th undermost backing was expend...
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... backing was expended in TB 0.20million.After that,Leprasy and tropical defect are sa...
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...as expended in TB 0.20million.After that,Leprasy and tropical defect are same backing wa...
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...l defect are same backing was 80million.Further more,diarrhoea diseases are less then c...
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... same backing was 80million.Further more,diarrhoea diseases are less then cash expand as c...
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...urther more,diarrhoea diseases are less then cash expand as compare leprasy and trop...
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...prasy and tropical defect was 60milliin.However,Malaria endemic backing expands 50milli...
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...nd tropical defect was 60milliin.However,Malaria endemic backing expands 50million. Movi...
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...acking expands 50million. Moving further,In 1990 leprasy endemic was least create d...
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...ast create downfall as 0.1to 0.2million.Although,AIDS endemic was more than leprasy lead...
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...ast create downfall as 0.1to 0.2million.Although,AIDS endemic was more than leprasy lead...
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...te downfall as 0.1to 0.2million.Although,AIDS endemic was more than leprasy lead to e...
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...rasy lead to ending is 0.2to 0.3million.Moreover,Tropical disease,malaria and diarrhoea ...
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...d to ending is 0.2to 0.3million.Moreover,Tropical disease,malaria and diarrhoea disorders...
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...2to 0.3million.Moreover,Tropical disease,malaria and diarrhoea disorders was make 0.3 to...
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...rders was make 0.3 to 0.4million demise.After backing money on defects.And also TB wa...
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...rders was make 0.3 to 0.4million demise.After backing money on defects.And also TB wa...
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...n demise.After backing money on defects.And also TB was maximum effects to decease ...
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...ion. In 1990,AIDS upermost finacing was expand but tgey least create downfall.Further ...
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...s expand but tgey least create downfall.Further more,TB minimum cash was expand but the...
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... tgey least create downfall.Further more,TB minimum cash was expand but they maximu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.30666666667 4.92477711251 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.45920271897 2.65546596893 168% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7258921147 43.030603864 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.5 112.824112599 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.5 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.23603664747 286% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 1.69756097561 1473% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141232390113 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113000793319 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153388195459 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113000793319 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153388195459 0.0819641961636 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.0 13.2329268293 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 61.2550243902 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.91 11.4140731707 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.06136585366 136% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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