The Bar graph depicts on the money spent in pounds on fast food items by different income groups broadly classified as high income, low income and average income in UK.
A glance at the graph reveals, the high income group are spending lots of amount in Hamburger and Pizza, when compared to other two groups, on the other hand more income is spent on fish and chips by Average income people. High income group are spending more amount approximately 42 million on Hamburger and Pizza, Average income group stood second in the list by spending 25 million and low amount of about 17 million is spent by low income group . All the three groups are spending less amount on pizza's , when compared to other fast food. High income group is spending just below 20 million, meanwhile Average income and low income group is spending just above 10 and 5 respectively. Average income group is spending about 25 million on fish and chips, the interesting thing to be noted here is both high income group and low income group is spending same amount of about 17 million .
Overall, all groups are spending less on pizza, when compared to other fast food.
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The Bar graph depicts on the money spent in pounds on fast food items...
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...als, the high income group are spending lots of amount in Hamburger and Pizza, when compared t...
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...e people. High income group are spending more amount approximately 42 million on ...
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...er and Pizza, Average income group stood second in the list by spending 25 millio...
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...d in the list by spending 25 million and low amount of about 17 million is spent...
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...lion and low amount of about 17 million is spent by low income group . All the ...
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... amount of about 17 million is spent by low income group . All the three groups ...
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...7 million is spent by low income group . All the three groups are spending less ...
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...llion on fish and chips, the interesting thing to be noted here is both high inco...
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...million . Overall, all groups are spending less on pizza, when compared to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26153981899 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6659130667 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.714285714 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346804461005 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208750772255 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993073420676 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280812594434 0.15604864568 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122229235888 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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