The bar graph compares the amount of coffee and meat consumed each year by Norway, France, Germany, USA, Russia, China and Japan.

The given bar graph compares the quantity of coffee and meat (in kg per person) consumption by 7 countries.

As it is clear from graph, coffee consumption is far less than meat in all countries. USA is having highest consumption of about 122 kg per person and closely followed by Germany with 87 kg per person. In Russia , Japan and China the meat consumption is less than 50 kg per person. France and Norway are having about 72 and 60 person per kg respectively.

Norway is having highest coffee consumption rate of about 9 kg per person when compared to other countries, Germany is in second place with 7 kg per person consumption. All other countries having less than or equal to 5 kg per person consumption.

To recapitulate, Meat consumed in larger amount in all countries and, while amount of coffee consumption is very much less.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The given bar graph compares the quantity of coffee and meat...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the highest'.
Suggestion: having the highest
...less than meat in all countries. USA is having highest consumption of about 122 kg per person ...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Germany with 87 kg per person. In Russia , Japan and China the meat consumption is...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...e and Norway are having about 72 and 60 person per kg respectively. Norway is hav...
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Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the highest'.
Suggestion: having the highest
...son per kg respectively. Norway is having highest coffee consumption rate of about 9 kg ...
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Line 8, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s having highest coffee consumption rate of about 9 kg per person when compared t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78911564626 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7885029535 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496598639456 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 195.3 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5071712881 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181841655671 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107740059808 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775368881006 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148575236141 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632430571745 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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