The supplied bar graph illustrates the total number of vacationers during the whole year, from spring to winter in Dover and Troy respectively.
In overview, we can see that the proportion of entire visitors observes the biggest rise over the 4-season period in Dover city. By contrast, the most popular time to travel to Troy is summer followed by fall, while in winter and spring, This place is considered a less common area.
It is clear that 5000 travellers came to Dover during the summer followed by the fall season with a nearly double total. Throughout the half of year, Tray city saw a significant jump in its figure of tourists, from merely under 5000 to quite above 20000.
On the other hand. By the second half of a calendar year, the figures for Troy city shifted symmetrically in summer and autumn visitors with a total of about 20, 000, and in spring and winter, however, trippers decreased to 5000. In the same period, the trend of Dover city tourists constantly increases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'fall'.
Suggestion: fall
... to Dover during the summer followed by the fall season with a nearly double total. Throughout ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80813953488 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50954774971 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9455793717 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.375 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.078115409571 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356542634317 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322231058969 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519612358442 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260419232359 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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