The bar graph gives information about number of male and female employed in different job types in Australia in 2003.
As is presented , more number of men were employed as tradespersons, second most employed job type is clerical, in contrast less as Labourers. Approximately 650 thousand men were employed as Managers and professionals and on the other hand around 550 thousand were employed as semiprofessionals and production. In contrast to men very less number of women employed as tradesperson and equal to number of women employed as production. Clerical is the first most employed job type in women , then second place is for professionals, third goes to semi professionals and fourth to Labourers. only one by third of men number is employment job type of women as Managers.
To Recapitulate in almost men are in more number in all job types in 3003 in Australia. only clerical is job type that had more number of women than men in all job types.
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...cond most employed job type is clerical, in contrast less as Labourers. Approxima...
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...nd on the other hand around 550 thousand were employed as semiprofessionals and p...
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...number of women employed as tradesperson and equal to number of women employed as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then, third, in contrast, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09258771108 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462962962963 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8024389337 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251989321987 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145559515426 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779738783112 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219355524334 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806701349632 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.