The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

Essay topics:

The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

The bar chart compares changes in the proportion of cinema goers in a European nation on distinct days over the 5-year-period.

Overall, Most people paid a visit to cinemas on weekends between 2003 and 2007. Additionally, the percentage of cinema attendants on Friday remained unchanged over these years.

In the first year, cinema goers on Saturday accounted for 40% of the total people going to cinemas. This figure constantly rose to its peak of 45 % in the following two years, which was the highest figure over the period researched, before falling to nearly 43% in 2007. The proportion of those on Sunday showed a similar pattern, with a slight rise ranging from 30% to nearly 33% at the same time. In contrast, the percentage of citizens paying a visit to cinemas on Friday stand at the same level of 30% during the whole time.

Tuesday and Wednesday saw the decreases in the figures of total cinema attendants to approximately 19% and about 10% in 2007 respectively. By contrast, the rates of those on Monday and Thursday went up to around 13% and a little below 15% at the final year.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81052631579 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67542853021 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594736842105 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1474663083 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183709766941 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744994984051 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534922788482 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109514014642 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476640688673 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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