Below tables are the use of water by four different countries

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Below tables are the use of water by four different countries.

The table gives information about water usage divided into 3 categories by 4 different countries. Overall, agriculture accounts for the most use in Egypt and Saudi Arabia whereas it is industry in the case of New Zealand and Canada. Additionally, the lowest figures mainly belong to domestic use, except for Egypt with industry.

The use of water in Egypt for agriculture was the highest number for agriculture with 82 units, followed by Saudi Arabia, New Zealand and Canada with 64, 44 and 10 units respectively.

In terms of the industrial use of water, Canada has the most use with 70 units and Egypt with only 10 units; in contrast,. Saudi Arabia and New Zealand are associated with 30 units and 46 units in this category.

Generally, the four countries have a low proportion for domestic use. The predominant in this category is Egypt with 12 units which is not much higher than the lowest figures in other groups, and the other three countries range from 6 to 10 units only.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, except for, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62524343903 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9679559147 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201203186091 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102222638934 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799126277449 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124211286908 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039770270838 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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