Essay topics:
Birth rates and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101
The line graph given provides us with information about the proportion of birth and death rates in the interval of 1901 and 2101 in New Zealand.
As can be seen from the statistics both birth and death rations fluctuated during the 20th century followed by a gradual uprise in death rates and a slight decrease in birth rates in subsequent century. According to the trend of birth bearing babies reached its peak over 60,000 babies in 1960s and had insignificant ups and downs during a score. At the beginning of 21st century birth rates increased slightly after dipping briefly to 50,000 infants i...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1960s'.
Suggestion: in the 1960s
...ies reached its peak over 60,000 babies in 1960s and had insignificant ups and downs dur...
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Discourse Markers used:
['briefly', 'however', 'if']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.30890052356 0.268076937826 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.120418848168 0.116061578633 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0575916230366 0.0759168565197 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471204188482 0.0366838410393 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0261780104712 0.0131127313244 200% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151832460733 0.155750635184 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0366492146597 0.0379272487307 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61133844971 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261780104712 0.0210936926555 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00523560209424 0.00175180941692 299% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0732984293194 0.0948980150116 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00523560209424 0.00437022459523 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1084.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.9 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08988764045 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370786516854 0.337110787985 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252808988764 0.247514529752 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174157303371 0.171178102325 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106741573034 0.112407865282 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61133844971 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.546246751206 110% => OK
Word variations: 55.3073557833 49.3433353143 112% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4285714286 23.0094962315 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9325621038 42.9750493124 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.857142857 135.714022679 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 23.0094962315 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 50.709470305 47.7609492067 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.56756756757 2.94281807926 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500341184126 0.418131533498 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149535389603 0.181151798455 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715247318164 0.0850326197045 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.770074996685 0.706616315825 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160221242934 0.157042692854 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.268024448883 0.228904883108 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138760706754 0.108899403657 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305868902757 0.367819155151 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.125454893836 0.0812612215331 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.359860786718 0.316326947829 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101867415461 0.0921553760075 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.14146341463 438% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 0.956097560976 523% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9